बार बार वही घाव……

बार बार वही घाव,

कभी शब्दों से किया आघात,

लबों को सी कर किये कभी वार…..

NaPoWriMo (#29): All season friend..

You, I love, on you I depend..
comforting and supporting, arguing and annoying..
you… an all season friend.
 
 

A haiku for today.

 
 

HAIKU

I have been lately not very active on either of my blogs; no addition to the “Chronicles of our love story” or to “Astonishing India” , no Weekly Photo challenges, no comments on the blogs of other blogger friends……absolutely nothing. But I have a valid excuse! I am almost on the last leg of my Creative Writing course and hence I was busy writing the assignment due for submission in May 2012.

I have under this course tried writing Haiku for the first time. I would like all the blogger friends to please give their opinions and advises on these :

#1.

Bare bough longing some color

Stinging words bleed the heart dry, lifeless

Has the autumn already arrived?

#2.

The deathly pale cracked earth

Rinsed, quenched, alive and bobbing paper boats

Elixir from the heaven above

#3.

Fire, wine and white snow

The melted wax and broken bangles shard

Memory of the night before