This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
Dear Sun…..
Dear Sun,
Oh! See….
See the tender buds,
all shriveled and burnt….
like the little girls… in womb, aborted !!
See…. the young blossoms,
wilted they fall,
no one wants them….
like the innocent daughters….raped!!
marked for life….!!
See…..the cracked parched earth,
turning into barren sand…..
like the bride, for dowry abandoned!!
Yes, the erring human has turned into a demon…
raping, killing,burning….
on a rampage, without any reason..
But You…. you are the God !
you breathe life into a dying soul…
dissipator of gloom, the God of energy!
Then why…. why this scorching rage?
Why the fiery gaze?
Why have you forsaken …
Your own creation?
O!! Lord Sun to thee I implore…..
diminish your fire….
let the earth respire…
Vanquish the demons…
On innocent, spare your ire…
‘Coz we can bear no more, oh no more!!
Mercy O lord, Mercy,mercy…..
Shoma Abhyankar 
crime against women were beautifully woven while addressing the sun, nice take
O! Dear Sun God
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thank you for appreciating the poem.
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Welcome to wow!!! A feel good post, precise and concise. good luck!
Stri
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Thanks srilakshmi.
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Very nicely written… and I just loved the analogy.. Thanks! 🙂
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thank you so much rashmi….it means a lot to b read and appreciated.
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Welcome to Write Over the Weekend. 🙂
I hope to read more from you in the future
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thank u pawan….i hope to b associated with write over weekend too. 🙂
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Nice to discover an architect connecting with poetry! Nice one…
Arvind Passey
http://www.passey.info
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Faarach SUNDER ANI timely poem zaliye, tuze Kautuk, , Shoma!! Proud.
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