In a world remade….
No mosques, no churches, no temples…
Would define religion…
‘Neath the heaven…
Just the heads would bow…
In a complete surrender!
In a world remade….
No discord, no fences, no borders…
Would provoke a war…
‘Neath the stars…
Just the eyes would rest…
In a peaceful slumber!
In a world remade…
No attire would curb her freedom…
No act would defile her being…
No dogmas would chastise her dream…
No hypocrites would preach her morals…
There would be just….
Some compassion to hold her hands..
Some encouragement to let her fly…
Some love to let her grow…
Some faith to restore her pride….
And some belief…
To let her rejoice her existence!
In a world remade….
None would beg and none would steal…
None would rape and none would kill…
‘Neath the warm sun…
Just the hands would join…
Brotherhood and contentment would prevail!
In a world remade….
No epidemic, no famine, no flood….
Would wipe humanity from the world….
‘Neath the blue skies…
In bliss would all thrive!
Oh!! In my world remade…
Love will bloom, Virtue will merit
None poor, none rich
Just the equal souls…
To celebrate the freedom…
Of Body, Mind and Spirit!!
Years ago Sri Rabindranath Tagore wrote the beautiful lines…..
“Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high…
Where knowledge is free….
Where the world has not been broken into fragments…”
It still holds true… such a world is still desired…It still is a dream. If I were to create a world, yes, I would want the human race to have a knowledge which abhors wars, discrimination, barbarism, abuse, inhumanity, jealousy, bigotry…..I would make a world where there would not be bribery, injustice, favoritism….all would live with dignity, with their heads held high, with pride, without any fear….There would be truth, honesty, logic, reasoning, bravery, respect, reverence, camaraderie….
There would be a story for each and everyone and like a fairytale, all stories will end in ‘Happily Ever After’…….Yes!! That would be world remade by me.
“I am participating in the #TheWorldRemade activity at BlogAdda in association with India Today #Conclave15 “.
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Shoma Abhyankar 
very nicely written……………I wrote on the same topic here http://vikrams777.blogspot.in/2015/03/the-flawless-world.html plz comment your views :)
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Congrats on the win! 🙂
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Thanks a lot
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I am also your fellow contest winner. Just wanted to know whether you will attend the conclave. I was planning to go but was looking for some company. 🙂
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Yes I am….and nice poem. Congrats on the win too.
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Congratulations Shoma! Lovely piece 🙂
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Thanks
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Congratulations to you!!!!!!!!
Have a great time at the conclave and do share your experience……….
Best Wishes.
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Thanks Swati…sure 🙂
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Lovely poem.. congrts for the win.
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Thanks Manjulika
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congratulations shoma….i am so happy to see u on the winner list……
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Thank you so much sunaina….your comment informed me of this development….I had not seen Blogadda’s mail.
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hey shoma….do us all a favor please….do blog about your experience when you visit the conference…..Thanks…
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Really nice….I have posted mine for this contest too and I was reading what others who have posted had to say. Of all that I have read so far, I liked yours the best. Very very beautiful, touching and sweet….Wish the world was like this….the lines I liked the most…..
Some compassion to hold her hands
Some encouragement to let her fly…
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Oh thank you so much Sunaina….this means a lot to me.Thanks again.
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Hey
You have expressed your views here in a very beautiful manner.
Wish you win!!!!
Regards
Swati
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Thank you so much Swati….Thats very sweet of you and so encouraging. If I win I will surely let you know… Thank you so much.
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Swati….thanks to your wishes I am one of the winners!!
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Superbly penned, Shoma! I do hope these dreams get fulfilled some day.
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Thank you Shilpa.I really hope so….
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